First, AWESOME pic, and very nice story matching it very well :)It's absolutely fine as it is.. I have two extremely minor criticisms..One.. typo.. "nedd" instead of "need"..Two, I would have made the pic a little bigger and the font of the text a little smaller, to limit the scrolling needed, but that's just me :) Still a great cap ! Steffimariechen's Forced Femme Caption Blog
They look so hot all lying there like that! Great caption, I love it when these things go wrong.
Wow, what a sexy little caption!Great work. xx